日本 - 上周见过风霜淡天兄以后，感觉自己有必要和他一样出来做点事情呵呵，于是决定把我当时申请的一封信，拿出来和大家分享，信我只给出信内容，附件由于涉及我个人的私人隐私，也就不拿出来了，可以和大家说下，我的个人成述写了大约２０００字英语，project和展望写了大概是１０万英语，有详细的图表和数据和演算！！有请外国朋友大概修改一下
这里是我信的正文，老师的回复我也不展示出来了，只告诉大家老师直接就在第一封信件中说，他愿意帮助我做这个领域的挑战者，欢迎我加入他们lab，由于这个老师是美国回来的，我说话的语气并不是特别的小日本当时，但是大家如果用日文写的时候还是要适当注意下，我这里发出我的第一个信，建议大家第一封信要注意最好不要有语法错误，还有用词错误，最好要注意下：
Dear Professor ＠＠＠> I plan to study for a master degree in ＠＠＠＠＠i＠＠＠. As Iknow> China is a basic gap in this area ,so i think it may has tremendous> prospects.That's why i choose it for my study .On the web of waseda> university,I have read many massages about teachers. I find your research> is perfectly fit my interset.Then I have decided to write a letter to you.> I have had plentiful preparations. In April of 2002, the technological> seminar of Sino-Japanese microwave was held in my school. The ITtechnology> of Japan impressed me a lot.From that time,i had a plan for study in> japan.In the university, I have studied a lot of important basic courses> and professional courses.My university is one of china's key universities> which is famous for its information and Electronic research.So it gave mea> good environment for study and I got very extensive and intensive> education.At the last two years of my university life,I often helped my> professor in his own research by translang some English essays that> professor is too busy to translate .During this period i has been muchmore> engross in doing independent research than preparing for exams.That> really improve my knowlege and expertise.In additon,I graduated and gotthe> bachelor's degree in July of 2005.Besides,i have a short time working> experience in business sector of a Hongkong company that enriches my> theory and society skill.In January of 2006,i arrived at tokyo.Now i am> studying japanese in tokyo.>> Are you going to recruit any new master students in the near future? Of> course it would be great if yes, and I'm very willing to start discussion> on a proposal with you.Anyway I'm looking forward to hearing from you, no> matter what the answer could be.Owing to the limited space available, i> attatch my personal statement ,project reporter which is finish ed in my> third year of university ,research plan in the attachment.> Thank you!> Sincerely yours,> Albert Zhang
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顶.........精华!![em17][em17][em17][em17][em17]
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project和展望写了大概是１０万英语??
想知道楼主都写了些什么?呵呵,
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１０万？？？竟撤犊子．．．你知道邮件最大 能装多少Ｍ＞＞＞？？？评论
嘿嘿，看不懂，但是顶一下~~~
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thanks for your sharing.
excellent work.
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lz 用的语法简单易懂, 但是很多都没有用过去时态. 不过能够拿出来和大家分享,已经很好了,谢谢
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どうもありがとう
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真的不错 谢谢这种奉献精神的人
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先感谢一下分享~~
p.s.10万?
我被吓到了...
我们的博士论文只要求10字以上而已...
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